Just really bad. If you think this is good, then keep trying. It is not even close to anything a sane person could listen to for longer than 30 seconds, and that is even pushing it. You have no flow, the rhymes are crap and your voice doens't fit, it has no punch to it. If this is what you want to continue doing I wish you good luck.
lets just say, i know you have made a ton of money off the stuff that you have on here!! So i guess i should take advice from you. Im not on here to hate on people, cuz everyone one has a certain talent , im just here for fun and by the way that was just a sample, i will have a professional recording done soon!!! God bless you and have a good day!!
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